First try at a produced song, I'm new to the scene. I learned so much from this song, that while I'm happy with it in the end, I'm absolutely sure I could have done much better with it. Here's to a good beginning, and a hopeful future!
lyrics
A scene takes.
A heart breaks.
I can't believe that this is over when it just began.
Some short prose.
And your doors close.
Why invest in love when love can't even go as planned.
An audience
Of Circumstance.
You left them at the table, so here I stand.
Your eyes, a brilliance.
My heart, annoyance stinging me.
I find myself hallucinating
Your hair's so soft. And agitating.
I can hear the sounds we were creating
Your music's excruciating, intimidating blue.
I won't speak.
My strings squeak.
Life is at a stand still since you took your records home.
A show tonight.
Won't feel right.
I won't look out and see your face, won't set the tone
My love is gone now.
I vow, to leave it all behind.
I find myself hallucinating
Your hair's so soft. And agitating.
I can hear the sounds we were creating
Your music's irritating, intimidating
Blue hair's weird, anyways .
DJ's smeared these days
Red eyes, despised.
There's no reprise.
I find myself hallucinating
Your hair's so soft. And agitating.
I can hear the sounds we were creating
Your music's infuriating, intimidating-
I find myself satiated.
Her thoughts are bright, and educated.
I can hear her voice elevated
Goodbye commiserated, isolated Blue.
credits
from Pone,
track released January 17, 2013
Written by: Fortissimo
All Parts Performed/Programmed by: Art Fonseca
Mixed by: Ryan Griffith & Art Fonseca
This album brings back a lot of memories of my early high school years, and the joy I got from seeing new things and discovering myself. I’m glad I was able to get a copy and support the artists instead of back then when I had to just listen to a YouTube playlist kramerthecourier